Friday, 22 July 2016

[CW] Write the most descriptive story you can with only one syllable words.

From the Reddit Post:
[CW] Write the most descriptive story you can with only one syllable words.

Earned 2 upvotes. Yikes. even for an over-all low scoring prompt, that is low.

Oh well, I enjoyed the challenge of writing this one.

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So they went to the wood
on a bright spring day
and they sat next to trees
and ate what they made
In the sun of the glade
with dew on the grass
with a mat on the ground
to stop from a wet ...bum.

"I want Jam"
The small one said
"We just have ham"
The tall one said
"But I want jaaaam!"
The small one quaked.
"If you sit still, then you can have cake"

The small one had juice
and drank it all up,
Whilst the tall one had tea,
in a fine bone cup.

and they bit and chomped
and ate all the food
and lay in the sun
which made them feel warm and good

As the sun dipped below
the edge of the sky
they rose from their spot
and they waved good bye.
Then they walked through the trees,
hand in hand,
And soon they were off,
to the sweet dream lands.

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